Narrator
Use a narrator if you think this suits the piece - I strongly advise using a narrator.
Redraft the script to include a narrator, perhaps. Experiment with this technique.
This gives a double view of the piece PLUS the Narrator relates directly to the listener ('you' - the directness of radio). It also allows you to use a knowing, ironic Narrator, who is all-knowing, who knows the outcome. The Narrator could be a main character in the story - and looking back at these transforming experiences. Listen out for radio plays where the main character speaks directly to the listeners in 'Dear Diary' sort of intercut scenes. The Narrator is also in a different acoustic - again this gives contrast to your overall design. Use microphone position two possibly? Or the 'voice in the mind' (position one)? And in a neutral acoustic (with three screens around - reflective side towards the actor). Think of first-person short stories and novels, and especially films.
More on types of narrator (academic)
If there is a narrator of the story, and so the play moves back and forth between two levels (a primary or extradiegetic narrator), the narrator is either an all-knowing, omniscient narrator (an 'author' narrator) or a fictional character who also appears in her or his own story ('first-person' narrator).
Examples: the all-knowing narrator in an adaptation of a novel, as the editorial voice of Dickens, Thackery, Trollope ('author' narrator); and the 'Dear Diary' narrator so often successful in R4 afternoon plays ('first-person' narrator).
The radio play may sometimes open, as does many a fictional film, with a narrator whose words lead us to believe that they are the source of all we hear.
See Adaptations for some suggested texts.
Note protagonist-dominated structure.
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