Louis Myles Episodes 13 - 'The Longest Day'

Kidnapping and the action-world of TV's '24' will grip you in these five episodes.

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LOCATIONS OFFICE - JUST AFTER LAST EPISODE

FX: OFFICE SOUNDS

JACK: I can't believe we missed that call - what do we do now?

COLIN: I managed to log of the system without being detected - when they ring again we can connect quicker

JACK: That's not what I mean - they will be hurting Liv now because we didn't answer the phone in time because of your failed..

COLIN: (MORE ANGRY) Do you want to find Liv or not? Because this is the best way, so don't hassle…

SYLVIA: BOYS! Boys boys - calm down will you! - There's no point at being at loggerheads - it doesn't solve anything - Now When one of my boys got kidnapped..

JACK: (laughs) Yeah I'm sorry. It's just that I can't imagine Liv being hurt like that - it's horrible.

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FX: PHONE RINGING. TYPING

JACK: Ok Tell me when..

COLIN: hang on - just logging in now. (UNDER BREATH) come on come on come on…..
FX: COMPUTER SOUND. TYPING

COLIN: Ok I'm in. Just typing in our location….

JACK: How long will that take.

COLIN: not very lon… pick it up!

FX: SPEAKERPHONE

JACK: Hello?

STEVEN: How nice of you too answer. I was beginning to wonder whether you had noticed our little 'surprise'

JACK: Who are you?

STEVEN: (CHUCKLES) I would be concerning yourself with making sure that Ms. Teaseman r eturns to you unharmed…

JACK: What do you want?

STEVEN: The first demand we are making is for you to go to the address that will follow shortly in your email inbox. When you get to that address you will pick up a package with detailed schematics to the warehouse for the film "breakaway" then you will return back to your office. Don't fail this task, or Ms. Teaseman will feel the repercussions.

FX: DEAD TONE

JACK: Did you get it?

COLIN: He wasn't on the phone long enough to get an exact location..

JACK: How close have we got?

COLIN: We've got ¼ mile radius where they could be - I'll search through for likely locations

3-3-2

OUTSIDE LOCATIONS OFFICE.

FX: WALKING ON PAVEMENT. DOOR FROM LOCATIONS OFFICE OPENS FLICK RUNS OUT

FLICK: (SHOUTS) JACK! JACK, Hold up

JACK: What is it flick?

FLICK: Colin's managed to get the landline phones working again!

JACK: Good news - has he called the police?

FLICK: Yes. Here's Sylv's mobile - it hasn't been affected by the shut off

JACK: That's grand - cheers flick. Look I better go.

FlICK: Ok see you (Giggles)

FX: JACK WALKS OFF. FLCIK TAPS IN NUMBERS TO PHONE

STEVEN: Hello Felicity

FLICK: Sorry, this is the first chance I've had to call you.

STEVEN: That's Ok.

FLICK: They've re-opened the phone lines in the office

STEVEN: That's to be expected; we're advanced enough to be able to deal with the police now.

FLICK: There's one other thing..

FX: DOOR OPENING

FLICK: I've got to go.

SYLV: Oh Flick- do you want a sandwich? I'm popping down the shop.

FLICK: (giggles) oh yeah - I'll have the usual please Sylv!

FX: SYLVA WALKING OFF

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WAREHOUSE

FX: WAREHOUSE SOUNDS. GAFFA BEING RIPPED FROM OLIVA'S MOUTH

OLIVIA: (PAINFUL) ahhhhhh!

STEVEN: Are you ready to talk?

OLIVIA: What have you got me here for?

STEVEN: (PAUSES) we are an international collaboration that seeks to overthrow the incumbent American administration due to the atrocities that it has, and continues to, commit around the world. Your investor has provided millions of dollars worth of "soft money" to fund this regime.

OLIVIA: Do you seriously believe that kidnapping me will stop them - it will only make him more determined

STEVEN: I am well aware of the potential connotations of a single action Ms Teaseman. The connotation of multiple actions, however, is a different matter. At this moment in time, we are in control of a number of your investor's companies. He will have to give in to us - eventually.

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JACKS CAR MOBILE

FX: RADIO. CAR NOISES. PHONE RINGING

JACK: yep?

COLIN: Jack, did you get to the address

JACK: Yeah I picked up the package.

COLIN: I've managed to track the location of that call

JACK: How?

COLIN: We managed to get hold of the police and got them to cross check the addresses in that ¼ mile radius. We found a disused warehouse on the East side of Canterbury - that looks our best match.

JACK: What do we do then?

COLIN: Are you still in the area where you picked up the package?

JACK: Yeah.

COLIN: We have to wait for the police to get everything into place

FX:CAR SKID

JACK: No - I'm going in now

COLIN: Jack you can't

JACK: Look give me the address - and I'll call you back when you get there - Colin - Trust me!

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INSIDE WAREHOUSE

FX: WAREHOUSE NOISES

JACK: (WHISPERS) Colin can you hear me?

COLIN: Yeah I've got you - according to the Police's Schematic's the likely location of the call will be in the office on the top left of warehouse. There should be a metal staircase directly in front of you

JACK: Ok going up now

FX: QUIET GOING UP STAIRS

JACK: I can see the office

COLIN: Go Slowly Jack

JACK: yeah

FX: BREAKING DOWN DOOR MUSIC BUILDS UP

COLIN: Jack? Jack are you there?

FX:BURSTING DOWN OF OTHER DOOR

COLIN: JACK?

JACK: There's no-one here!

COLIN: What?

JACK: Are you sure you've got the right place?

COLIN: Yeah - yeah I am sure

JACK: Well there's no one here !

FX: CRESCENDO BUILDING UP TO END